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Wind Drake's Song by ~pan-feylin:iconpan-feylin:



"But high she shoots through air and light,
       above all low delay,
Where nothing earthly bounds her flight,
       nor shadow dims her way."

All through the pale unearthly sky,
       she sails out on her way,
There's naught but fragile dragon wings,
       yet naught can bound her way.

The winter winds and summer clouds,
       the pale and sunlit, both,
Beneath the fragile wings speed by,
       thus marking each year's growth.

And o'er the years that come and go,
       how many seasons by,
She still shoots high, amidst the clouds-
   She will forever fly.
©2009 ~pan-feylin
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Author's Comments

The first stanza is from a Magic the Gathering card, Wind Drake.


The rest was me, bored in summer school.




First stanza belongs to Wizards of the Coast.

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:iconpurple-the-cactus:
Very nice and picturistic :)
I couldn't even tell your writing apart from the original stanza

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A journey of a thousand miles can sometimes end very, very badly.
:iconpan-feylin:
Thank you! And yeah, the idea was a continuation of the first stanza (which is stand alone), so I'm glad it flows well from that to my part.

Also, picturistic is officially the best word ever. :D

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I'm a TEENAGER, so I MUST have a STEREOTYPE.

Repo! The Genetic Opera [link]
:iconpurple-the-cactus:
Okay. I probably derived it from the word pittoresque, which was an adjective I learned in French last year. I think it really translates to picturesque though, so my bad. :blush:

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A journey of a thousand miles can sometimes end very, very badly.
:iconwhy-not-green:
Aw that's a nice poem. I can't believe you have time to be bored in summer school. They're trying to cramp a whole semester's worth of work and you have time to be bored.
:iconpan-feylin:
Only for the 20 minute break and like, 5 minutes in class when some people were still working.

Plus the bus.

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I'm a TEENAGER, so I MUST have a STEREOTYPE.

Repo! The Genetic Opera [link]
:iconpan-feylin:
Eh, close enough.

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I'm a TEENAGER, so I MUST have a STEREOTYPE.

Repo! The Genetic Opera [link]
:iconwhy-not-green:
ah. can't be as dull as sail school. If you have any free time you can't do anything. you're bored... its like illegal to talk about anything that isn't boat related on the boat.
:iconpan-feylin:
Really, illegal?

Do they throw you overboard if you talk about non-boat related things? :icongaspplz:

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I'm a TEENAGER, so I MUST have a STEREOTYPE.

Repo! The Genetic Opera [link]
:iconwhy-not-green:
no it just seems like it. But there's another instructor who's so laid back. Hopefully I get to stay with him the rest of the week.

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